For People Who Don't Care, From Someone Who Doesn't Care
You need to immediately establish her motivation. Why does she want rain?I already told you how big hangars can sometimes generate enough of a greenhouse effect to create rain. Maybe it does rain, but she wants rain immediately.Or maybe the city is so controlled that it can't rain. A fake sun, fake tans, fake plants, fake smiles, fake boobs... That might be better since it sounds like you're trying to be more allegorical.
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